Adam and Eve

took the garden

Eden was witness

to their plea

rewrite that plot

banish the serpent

bestow luscious apples

create in harmony

death not penalty

cane and abel

born of love

religion forced vernacular

symbolism of fear

forcing reverse inspiration

icons always cynical

identities streamlined suitably

illustrations pitching sanctity

roam free forwards

flawless garden temptations

songs echoing prayer

explore differing insights

dreams revisiting destinations

Redefine that plot

Remix creation logic


One Reply to “Creation”

  1. “Remix the creation logic”
    The gist of the poem rhythmically flows out of poem
    Smooth poem very very nice beginning and end


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