Adam and Eve
took the garden
Eden was witness
to their plea
rewrite that plot
banish the serpent
bestow luscious apples
create in harmony
death not penalty
cane and abel
born of love
religion forced vernacular
symbolism of fear
forcing reverse inspiration
icons always cynical
identities streamlined suitably
illustrations pitching sanctity
roam free forwards
flawless garden temptations
songs echoing prayer
explore differing insights
dreams revisiting destinations
Redefine that plot
Remix creation logic
Kashiana 
“Remix the creation logic”
The gist of the poem rhythmically flows out of poem
Smooth poem very very nice beginning and end
Papa
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